The Final Mission - Part 15
April 10th, 2017, 4:27 pm
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April 10th, 2017, 4:27 pmReply
At this point... I'm honestly not sure how to continue writing this final battle. I'm considering cutting it down compared to what I was originally thinking, mainly because of my continued-dwindling interest in working with sprites, and the sheer difficulty in conveying proper action sequences in sprite comic format anyway. What would you guys think if this battle against Miracle Matter doesn't last for too many more pages?Advertisement,
April 27th, 2017, 4:05 amReply
April 10th, 2017, 4:53 pmReply
Maybe a montage?TheJGamer,
April 10th, 2017, 5:36 pmReply
A Flash animation? Or maybe a series of hand-drawn panels?littlekirby61524,
April 10th, 2017, 9:07 pmReply
I'm fine with you shortening this battle, considering how MM is, it'd be pretty repetitive with how things would go.Redkirby,
April 10th, 2017, 9:16 pmReply
If you're uninterested in working with sprites, then you could maybe shift the comic's artstyle to something you're more comfortable with, like hand drawn art.
If you're worried about the final battle becoming boring or repetitive or something like that, then you could try making it more interesting, by maybe have Kirby's battle with Miracle Matter get entangled with Zykan and Meta Knight's duel. Or bring in some side characters, perhaps you have some of the past foes the KAS fought come in. And hey, I don't think we've seen Whirr this entire segment. What's HE doing?
In terms of shortening the fight, I really don't care, so long as the payoff is good. I hope it's not going to be like the end of the first DBZ Broly movie, where after tons of buildup, the villain is defeated in a really anti-climatic way.
April 10th, 2017, 9:21 pmReply
Also, (I made this a separate comment because it isn't really related to my previous one) Kirby Adventure is currently on the verge of overtaking Bob and George as second longest sprite comic, to my knowledge. (Bob and George used to be the longest sprite comic, lasting over seven years, until recently Kirby's Dream Adventure beat it out). Granted, this comic has mostly lasted as long as it has due to delays, but it still is impressive that its stayed active on here for as long as it has.TheJGamer,
April 10th, 2017, 9:46 pmReply
@Redkirby: Where is Bob and George? Did it get deleted? I can't seem to find it in SJ.Guest,
April 11th, 2017, 7:07 amReply
April 11th, 2017, 10:01 amReply
I feel like at this point advancing the plot would be a higher priority over well-built action scenes.Warpstar,
April 11th, 2017, 8:42 pmReply
I don't know, maybe it would help if they wouldn't talk too much. Also, you might try putting in some elements like the warpstars. If not that, then add Miracle Matter's little pawns.
If you make it shorter, like a montage, it might not seem as good since there's a lot of other fights longer, like Talzo's escape, Master Green, and the meeting with the KAS and Miracle Matter's ... pawns.
Be creative, you know, like when characters from media think outside the box.
If you can, make the atmosphere more breath-taking. Unless it's too much.
April 12th, 2017, 1:05 pmReply
@TheJGamer: Or maybe have plasma dude charge up a huge laser and destroy the world as we know it?
Yeah I went a little to far there
April 12th, 2017, 1:05 pmReply
@KirbyFighterDeluxe: And more Kirbies to die...SilverKiwi (Guest),
April 12th, 2017, 3:09 pmReply
Maybe you could make it a little shorter and then add a montage at the end just so it's not as short, as just doing a regular montageNashew,
April 13th, 2017, 8:07 pmReply
If Talzo's smart, he won't stick around long enough after this battle for their revenge.
I mean, if he lives. I wonder how many more people Ulti's gonna kill...?
April 14th, 2017, 8:16 amReply