The Final Mission - Part 5
December 30th, 2016, 4:54 pm
Average Rating: 5.00
December 30th, 2016, 4:54 pmReply
Stress, depression, and motivation issues worked in tandem to delay this page. Luckily, I had at least already announced a brief hiatus beforehand due to Thanksgiving break, it just ended up being several weeks longer than initially anticipated.Advertisement,
April 27th, 2017, 4:15 amReply
December 30th, 2016, 5:27 pmReply
Hi! Are you avaliable for comic reviews? I want my comic to be reviewed.TheJGamer,
December 30th, 2016, 5:29 pmReply
Also, I'm a new reader, so...
...I have a LOT of pages to read through...
December 30th, 2016, 5:33 pmReply
Ooh, nice job. Yeah, a bit cheesy but whatever.
Plus, Jarkes' reaction would have been mine if I had to run back to not get killed.
Dark Matter should just have him come back to visit every once in a while.
You can edit your comments, you don't have to keep making new ones.
But I don't think it would be novel to do that, since I can't explain stories that good and it's better to read, since it tells more than I could.
December 30th, 2016, 5:34 pmReply
@Warpstar: Can you explain the story for me? I'm a new reader here.TheJGamer,
December 30th, 2016, 5:42 pmReply
@Warpstar: That's fine. Also, check out my comic if you feel like it. =)
Light and Shadow,
EDIT: I knew that I can edit comments, I just got a bit lazy, I guess.
December 30th, 2016, 6:44 pmReply
Had to throw in one more sad scene before the new year didn't you Ulti?Elemental Kirby,
December 30th, 2016, 7:19 pmReply
@TheJGamer: Man, this is going to be hard, especially without revealing too much. TheJGamer, prepare yourself for a short explanation of the story.
Kirby Adventure is as said at the description, " a group of Kirbies who take requests from random clients and attempt to complete them! And mostly fail miserably!"- Ultizeta. So this group of Kirbies are part of an organization that is supposed to assist and protect the beings of dreamland. From the cast section you can see that there are 4 divisions with other members. The main characters are assembled as Division A, they mostly complete the tasks sent to them and do this throughout most of the comic which includes battling villains and stopping troublemakers.
Now to better the explanation , I would need to reveal a slight more just for you to get a feel of it. Reply back if you're okay with a little spoilers (At least 1).
December 30th, 2016, 7:28 pmReply
I'm not crying you're crying.CapedLuigisYoshi,
December 30th, 2016, 9:50 pmReply
That actually went a lot better than I was expecting.
...But in hindsight, it actually makes more sense - the group really needed a push like this to help dealing with Keito's death, since there's not enough time left in the comic for them to develop past it naturally.
December 30th, 2016, 9:55 pmReply
Screams for help are always a good way to kill any mood.
I'm also pretty sure Shadik speaks his mind all the time.
December 30th, 2016, 10:02 pmReply
@Elemental Kirby: I don't want spoilers unfortunately. However, I do like the comic's plot!Elemental Kirby,
December 30th, 2016, 10:57 pmReply
@TheJGamer: Alright then.TheJGamer,
December 30th, 2016, 11:07 pmReply
@Elemental Kirby: I just started reading, and I put my opinions on every page. Look at them and feel free to correct me if I'm wrong!KirbyFighterDeluxe,
December 31st, 2016, 1:33 amReply
oh hey those guysNova Ozuka,
December 31st, 2016, 10:26 amReply
Gotta love how Shadik has the same wide eyed expression for 9 panels.Redkirby,
December 31st, 2016, 2:21 pmReply
So, one last page before the new year eh Ulti?Samzer123 (Guest),
April 17th, 2017, 10:16 amReply