The Beginning... - Part 1
April 15th, 2011, 2:51 pm
Average Rating: 4.55
April 15th, 2011, 2:57 pmReply
Ooooh, ominous! The True Arena! All of you who've played Super Star Ultra knows of that grueling subgame. How will Kirby fare? Only I can tell the tale...
Who is that Kirby off to the right of panel 9? Again, I know but you don't!
The story will be told as if it was real time; Kirby's narration will only appear in the end.
It won't be grayscaled because I think it would be better to be in color.
What, no comments about the upgraded cast page? :C
Since it always alarms everybody when I don't update for a short span of time, I will be going on a short vacation tomorrow, and I won't be back until Tuesday. That is why this update was early. Again, I'll have my netbook laptop with me, but it has none of my comic-making equipment. So no new comics, but I CAN comment and reply to you guys.
April 28th, 2017, 5:01 pmReply
User's CommentsEvil Eye,
April 15th, 2011, 3:00 pmReply
This is going to have something to do with Marx soul I just Know it. Hey first comment.Secret Agent 000 (Guest),
April 15th, 2011, 3:12 pmReply
Wait...did he ever defeat Marx in your comic's continuity?
And it looks like they went through a portal in the second panel, if I'm not mistaken.
April 15th, 2011, 3:14 pmReply
@ Secret Agent 000
Maybe, maybe not.
BlackHeart the Unbelievable,
Remember back in Average Days For Unaverage Puffs? Part 4?
April 15th, 2011, 3:19 pmReply
Anyone else notice that Ryka asked the SAME EXACT THING Vezo asked at Part 2 of The First Mission at the SAME EXACT PLACE?Ultimate Yoshi,
April 15th, 2011, 3:22 pmReply
@ BlackHeart The Unbelievable
I guess that little floating island thing spawns a lot of questions. :P1ce_k1d,
April 15th, 2011, 3:23 pmReply
This chapter could use a chapter button...Ultimate Yoshi,
April 15th, 2011, 3:24 pmReply
The reason it doesn't is because the chapter button I made for it has some spoilers, so it will wait.
Besides, right now all you need to do is hit Latest Comic. :P
April 15th, 2011, 3:25 pmReply
Curiosity Island anyone?Evil Eye,
April 15th, 2011, 3:51 pmReply
@ Ultimate Yoshi
While we are on the subject is Talzo ever coming back?Gigi19972010,
April 15th, 2011, 3:56 pmReply
It's weird... Weird... And weird... So weird... REALLY WEIRD... What is weird? es ue essatnoc ue airatse odnatnoc mu oderges ad ahnim qh! I'm weird. :PJarkes (Guest),
April 15th, 2011, 4:14 pmReply
Oh, dear god... The True Arena... I HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE the True Arena! One time, I was JUST about to defeat Marx Soul once and for all, and then this:
Marx Soul: IMMA FIRIN' MY BWAAAAAAH! [Does his Frickin Laser Beam attack]
No, I did not actually say that. That's just what I was thinking. Seriously, I literally had one or two more strikes with the hammer to go, and he pulled that frickin laser beam on me!
April 15th, 2011, 4:17 pmReply
Here's a comment about the upgraded cast page: I noticed that it says Talzo "still has his good tendencies." Any chance we'll see any of that any time soon?Jarkes (Guest),
April 15th, 2011, 4:19 pmReply
I also noticed that, technically, this storyline would be their REAL first mission, if you catch my drift.DarkNut255,
April 15th, 2011, 4:44 pmReply
*twitch* REAL TOMATOES!!! ARGHHH!
Also, is that Keeby?
April 15th, 2011, 4:52 pmReply
Evil Eye - Of course Talzo is coming back! He's the only real villain I've made for the comic.
Jarkes - I actually didn't find the True Arena all too difficult. The only hard one for me was Galacta Knight. The first time I got up to Marx Soul, I beat him.
Jarkes (2nd Comment) - Yes, we will. I included that as a hint for something about Talzo's character.
Jarkes (3rd Comment) - Not really. This is how the KAS was formed, not their first mission. Besides, the first chapter was only called The First Mission because it was the first one we got to see.
DarkNut255 - Mayyyyyyyybe.
April 15th, 2011, 6:41 pmReply
curse you and your rating bar. the kirbies looks so sad when you don't rank it, and they look so happy when you do.
was this a guilty trip psychologic trap or did it just come out like that.
by the way...i don't play a lot of kirby, but i think what your doing with this is freaking awesome! I could hug you now, but i can't.
happy writing! good luck
April 15th, 2011, 6:48 pmReply
Floating islands are great places to think or brood. Just as a certain red freak with dreadlocks.
On a puff-ball related note, Kirby's gotta be getting tired from so much talking.
April 15th, 2011, 7:55 pmReply
CONGRADULATIONS! YOU BEAT THE ARENA!
NEW GAME UNLOCKED
ME:The true arena?
~10 Minutes later~
Anyway, I like the new cast page, glad talzo is coming back, I liked him.
I also hope Kirby picks up that envelope! I hate litterbugs! DX
April 15th, 2011, 8:09 pmReply
true arena! from Kirby superstars ultra (DS), isn't it?RS (Guest),
April 16th, 2011, 1:10 pmReply
No way!You have to use rock!
I beat Marx soul that way.
Sure,I had to wait a long time posing as a rock while Marx soul was attacking so many times. But,I eventually pulled it off. Use rock cuz it has the best defense.
April 16th, 2011, 3:45 pmReply
I used rock too. Invincible is the best defense.RS (Guest),
April 16th, 2011, 4:12 pmReply
I love commenting!I'm gonna start commenting this comic!Secret Agent 000 (Guest),
April 16th, 2011, 5:59 pmReply
WARNING. LONG POST AHEAD.
@everybody talking about Talzo
...well, he IS on the cast page, so I'm thinking that he kinda HAS to appear.
Of course, it may be a while, to add to the impact, but he'll appear.
...unless this comic goes all F@NB0Y$ on us...
...TRIPLE post? REALLY?
Oh yeah, it's kinda hard. That's kinda why it the title is the TRUE Arena.
HOW DID YOU DO THAT!?!
...And as for the Yo-Yo for Lololo and Lalala, of course. You can attack them from above OR below, repeatedly, without giving them access to attack you.
...good for you.
@everybody rooting for the "Stone" ability
...the invincibility is really good, but there is a SERIOUS problem with it.
The enemies still target you, so when you go attack the enemies, you can't get OUT safely to attack them again, because of the contact damage.
Of course, if you stay invincible while an ally attacks the enemy, then you're golden, since (at risk of sounding like a horrible person) your ally can die without it really mattering (whereas if YOU die, it's Game Over for both of you).
Of course, since the ally will take damage, and therefore eventually die, this only really works in...um...whatever that one was called where Marx was originally in..(I know it was right after the Great Cave Offensive, but I just CAN'T remember the name...urg.)
...wrong universe. I mean, he isn't even necessarily in the BRAWL universe. So, yeah.
...the FAN ART button has TALZO on it. Think about that for a bit. He kinda seems unqualified for that position, since he's kinda, ya know, the SWORN ENEMY of the squad...
...and of COURSE Kirby's going to win, or at least tie, assuming that page 112 is accurate in that he is undefeated as a swordsman, since he presumably would be USING Sword, and would therefore have not been defeated in canon, and as this is a flashback, has already happened.
...and I have a sneaking suspicion that Talzo appears in this flashback, and that he ends up saving Kirby.
April 17th, 2011, 7:56 amReply
@ Secret Agent 000
What difference does that make? Talzo is a very popular character and has a lot of fan art. The only character with more is Caiya, but I chose her for the Cast button.
Kirby actually does not have his Stored Ability at this point in time.
Talzo will not be appearing for some time. And if Talzo HAD saved Kirby in some way, Kirby would've recognized him when Talzo was captured during Average Days For Unaverage Puffs. And during Escape!, Kirby calls Talzo 'Intruder' and 'Blue Kirby'. If Talzo had helped Kirby in the True Arena, Kirby would've at least known who he was. But their first meeting was when Talzo was captured.
So yeah, Talzo is not in this segment at all, and he won't be appearing for some time. I won't tell when, though.
July 17th, 2012, 9:19 pmReply
The whole idea of a origin comic is always appealing :P cant wait to see how this ends up.MarioGame64,
September 7th, 2012, 10:34 pmReply
I STILL haven't beaten the True Arena... :/Guest,
November 19th, 2012, 4:47 amReply
June 27th, 2013, 7:57 pmReply
AAH! so many comments! can't read! *explodes*Nekotive,
May 25th, 2014, 11:20 amReply