Meet The KAS - Part 1
February 27th, 2011, 11:37 am
Average Rating: 4.50
February 27th, 2011, 11:51 amReply
Hai dere. Break is over, and new segment time! (Finally!)
Introducing Ryka (pronounced ree-kah, not rai-kah), a new member of the KAS. No, she isn't gonna be a main character, no, she won't join Division A. She is also not Story Teller, Astralle's character that she gets to create for winning the Art Contest. I have yet to get character data for that. No, Ryka is just another minor character I made up simply for one purpose:
This segment and the following segment are gonna be all about explaining stuff, showing more character personalities, and going into the background of the Kirby Adventure Squad. Why? Well, the personality stuff is simply cause I am very bad at creating the personalities I want the characters to have, so this is hopefully going to get some of those personalities going. Like Saia's, for example. She's practically NOTHING like I want her to be. Though characters like Caiya, Keito, and Shadik are developed fairly well, I still need to pick up on some other ones. The KAS backstory part comes from a review of Kirby Adventure by KingCorp (who is also my 100th fan). You can find it here: http://wereviewyoudontsue.smackjeeves.com/comics/1122336/kingcorp-reviews-kirby-adventure/
Anyways, KingCorp rated it a 70/100 (which is apparently a C). He talked about the character personalities, specifically, them not showing their personalities very much. I completely agree, otherwise I wouldn't be doing this segment. The other thing he mentioned was the idea of going into the backstory of the KAS. That's a fairly good idea, so I must give him credit for that. And while I'm giving credit, the emoticon bubble in panel 6 is once again made by Djoing and The_mad_one. The only thing I dislike about KingCorp's review was that he gave me a bad Originality grade. While I understand that Kirby sprite comics in general aren't anything new, I don't think it was very fair to compare it to Strike Force Squad, a comic that doesn't even exist anymore (though I wish it did).
Alright, rambling out of the way. Enjoy the comics and the new schedule.
April 28th, 2017, 4:56 pmReply
February 27th, 2011, 11:55 amReply
The best division and Caiya make does something that makes people think otherwise! Classic! xDDarkNut255,
February 27th, 2011, 12:12 pmReply
Good one!Story teller, Astralle,
February 27th, 2011, 12:37 pmReply
For the record, I did send in my character a few days after I won. I sent it to your email like I did last time. Unless you changed it!!Luigi_96,
February 27th, 2011, 12:42 pmReply
February 27th, 2011, 12:49 pmReply
what about Pumpkin Experience? You haven't updated that in a while...1ce_k1d,
February 27th, 2011, 1:21 pmReply
PUT HER IN THE BANNER!Ultimate Yoshi,
February 27th, 2011, 1:43 pmReply
Not only does StrikeForce Squad not exist anymore, LoneAlchemist himself is just gone completely, all his comments, his profile, his comics, everything. I have no idea why.BattleStarX,
February 27th, 2011, 2:05 pmReply
Ah, glad to see ya back, Yoshi. Also good to see some personifying to come. Should be good for some laughs.RockmanX,
February 27th, 2011, 2:09 pmReply
February 27th, 2011, 4:39 pmReply
Well, I always thought Keito looked like a waffle. He seems to be the one who stops Caiya from...well...eating everyone.Gigi19972010,
February 27th, 2011, 5:31 pmReply
Creating personality for a caracter is the hardest thing when you are making a comic, at least in my opinion. I always get worried about that, mainly because I don't know how to show most of them and I even don't know my own personality...RS (Guest),
February 27th, 2011, 5:53 pmReply
Whoa,I'm diggin that style.Kirchu,
February 27th, 2011, 7:28 pmReply
LoneAlchemist deleted everything for 3 reasons.
1. People were stealing sprites.
2. Real life stuff got in the way.
3. He just got bored of making comics.
February 28th, 2011, 3:00 pmReply
I don't think it was fair that you got 9/10 for spelling and grammar "just in case"luckydeath93 (Guest),
February 28th, 2011, 3:02 pmReply
Actually, he quit just about EVERYTHING! He stopped making comics, videos, and everything else! (Which sucks, really)BlagH (Guest),
February 28th, 2011, 3:24 pmReply
Sorry about my tantrum last comic, it was just sort of frustrating. All things aside, cool idea for a new segment.BlackHeart the Unbelievable,
February 28th, 2011, 9:24 pmReply
Scratch out 1. He said that wasn't the reason
Anyways, I argue with Keito's statement. He looks exactly like a waffle.
March 23rd, 2011, 3:16 pmReply
CAIYA! STOP TRYING TO EAT YOUR TEAMMATES! Go... eat Marx, or Dedede. ...Please? ...WAIT, NO! Not me! I'M NOT FOOD! *Flys away in Warpstar*
*Ditches Warpstar and gets in a TIE Advanced*
*Docks with Death Star and blows up Dreamland*
There. I should be safe now.
*Jaws music starts*
Oh, what now?
*Looks out viewpost and sees Caiya's mouth*
April 10th, 2011, 8:45 pmReply
Is Ryka related to Aika? 'Cause they have similar names, they're the same color... Speaking of which, is Aika really all that important? If she isn't, why is she in the banner?Ultimate Yoshi,
April 12th, 2011, 9:56 amReply
No, Ryka is not related to Aika.
Aika IS important. Why else would she be on the banner? I just haven't found the right time to get her involved in the main storyline.
October 20th, 2014, 7:23 pmReply